2/26/09

The 14 Year Old. (2-25-09)

She was young, talented, smart, she was everything. Until the day she started hanging with the wrong crowd. Jamie, was her name and she was only fourteen. By her being adopted at the age of she is changed her whole life. She didn't know longer attend private school. Public schools were everyone was loud, obnoxious, bad and had attitude. Jamie was the new student, everyone welcomed her. The baddest of the baddest welcomed her. They were call "The Real Divas". Two weeks later Jamie was apart of that. She was getting suspended frequently, and her foster parents did not tend to care. Fighting, nasty attitude, bad habits were the names to describe her. She was only in the eight grade, her dream was to become an Orthodontist, now she has no dream. Those four little youngens' she was hanging with were trouble. Jamie new she had asthma, but still she took chances, by smoking every tobacco product, and drinking every type of alcohol. Jamie took those risks. Then all of a sudden it was peer pressure. Without parental permission, tattoos and piercings begin to appear. As her parents tried to talk to her nothing seemed to work. The next day she took a test and the response was positive for pregnancy. What was her next decision, instead the divas had stopped hanging with her. So it was just Jamie all by herself. She made a bad decision, about the baby she was going to carry. She thought things like, she;s not going to have an abortion, nor carry the baby, instead she killed it. And killed herself.....

2 comments:

  1. Oh my!!! You might continue this story (I assume it's fiction) but talking about one small part of the story, like the day she got her piercings or her struggle to smoke a cigarette even though she has asthma.

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  2. Wow this is a good story...i agree with clary you should definitely continue this...the end left me wanting to read more.

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